toucanne
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Joined: 10/5/2005
From: Pahrump, Nevada
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There's still something that bothers me about the colors. Maybe it is that the red and the green pieces are about equal in size and quantity and spread out all over. They fight and your eye doesn't know where to go. I like the dribbles, they add vertical interest, and I like the aloe leaf/sharp tongue shapes. 
If you want to make this a series, call this one a study and do another 2 or 3 in the same vein. You may end up showing those and not your first one. That has happened to me before. In your next one, try a greater variety of shape sizes. I am looking at your avatar at the same time. Your avatar has a better focal point and better use of color, as well as balance of small and large shapes.
Good luck! 
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