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Well developed statement? - 10/12/2008 8:43:39 AM

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Can you give me an example of a well developed statement?

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RE: Well developed statement? - 10/12/2008 10:16:57 AM

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Sure can!

Take a look at Tracey's recent Spam & Trout entry:
http://www.ebsqart.com/ArtShows/cmd_182_Exhibition_Entries_1_2_G.htm

Imagine if she had simply said "An unconventional still life with spam & trout" or simply "still life" (trust me, we get statements that say that little or worse, nothing at all)

Some artists do have substantial statements, but they are more general, or talk about how their work is a good investment, or is in general a sales pitch geared towards eBay, etc. We are not interested in these kinds of statements. We want you to talk about each individual piece you submit with text that is specific to that piece.

Approach your artist statements the same way we do as part of our general show entry requirements:

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An artist's statement is required with every entry. Tell us about the materials and process you used to create your entry and something about why you chose to represent your subject in the manner or media that you did. Your statement is an important element in presenting your work online and helps make your work more accessible for the viewer. If texture or other small elements are pivotal to the piece, detail shots are encouraged.

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RE: Well developed statement? - 10/12/2008 12:02:20 PM

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Thanks! I can see I need to do a little revamping!

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RE: Well developed statement? - 10/12/2008 6:28:10 PM

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I do want to add that I highlight Tracey's for a couple of reaons. One is because it is wonderfully descriptive. The other is that it is also incredibly short. You don't need to write a novel to convey a lot of quality information about your art. Tracey sets the scene vividly and concisely, and this really works for her.

Just food for thought...

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RE: Well developed statement? - 10/12/2008 6:45:54 PM

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Good info. I know that it seems I'm always pushing to get to the next task at hand and don't put enough thought into the wording. It would be nice if I could split myself in two and let one do the painting and one do the marketing!

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RE: Well developed statement? - 10/12/2008 11:40:23 PM

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Thank you Aime. That really helped!
I just went back and revised my statements
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RE: Well developed statement? - 10/13/2008 11:08:05 AM

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glad I could help, Pam! and it's nice to see you here in the forums; don't be a stranger!

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